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Hi all!

I just posted a new song called Falling Away .It is my first recording with my Les Paul.

I apologize for not writing back on the songs i do check out.There is a lot talent out here and i enjoy ever moment of listening to you all. Great stuff people! I will try to do better in the future to responding to the material i listen to.

Thanks for checking me out as always!

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Justin, thanks!
By My Side is actually a song I wrote about 10 years ago right before I got married. Yes, it was originally about my ex-wife, though now in hindsight...

I had writers block for awhile and decided to go through some old stuff. This was one of the better ones I came across.

Job hunting sucks but I'm not letting it get me down. I'll find something. At least I'm getting to spend a lot of time with my daughter.

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Shawn -

LOL.



DrLoop-

Cool guitars. Drums are way too low for a song like this IMHO. Samples, I take it? Real drums would add some rockin feel to this. I like the riffs, but the whole thing seems to lack that "rocking-ness" one would get when a song drives one to "head nodding". Maybe it is because the guitars are so rocking.

As I am reading this back it sounds a bit harsh, but you need a drummer Dr. Loop! Your guitars are played and recorded awesomely.

let us know when you finish it!

-Justin

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i loaded another song up called "you cant take it with you" at this site...http://user.cybrzn.com/skyking/...........kind of if you mated toby keith with the cars type song that i wrote.......chas

http://user.cybrzn.com/skyking/

Any metal fans?
 

This is band whos members I grew up with and they needed a demo. Just picked up sound replacer and thought i'd better use it becasue the kid can play the drums he just cant tune em. check it out.

http://www.myspace.com/index.cfm?fus...20041001123257
download bloodstained sunsets. dont stream it, it wont sound as good.

Let me know what you guys think.

Randlerawk

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You cant take it with you is a Cool song. Good recording.

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sweet dude! Is that you singing? I like the vocals.

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Hey Justin,

Thanks for checking it out and what you said is not harsh at all. Any honest feedback is great!
Fresh ears will pick up stuff i don't hear right away or not at all.

I agree the drums are a little low.I am going bring them up a little bit more and yes the drums are loops. I would love to find a drummer to lay down some rockin drum tracks as well as a singer.

Just got the Les Paul and really digging how it sounds recorded.

Thanks for feedback and compliment on the guitars in Falling Away .

Bob

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spkguitar-

Shawn,
Man, I really enjoyed that...every part of it is well done(very nice solo... )...I can hear the honesty in your lead vocal and lyrics, and everything else complements that. Good song...good job.
-Roy

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Roy,
Thanks.
I'm building on the vocals a little, adding some harmonies, and I might take out or change the organ; I'm not totally satisfied with it.

Thanks again!