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SoundDirk 08-11-2019 07:59 AM

Re: feedback/criticism please
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by JRReedVE (Post 2533035)
Can I get some feedback/criticism on my reel please.



https://vimeo.com/348686049



JR

Yes.. [emoji6]... my 2 Cents...
1. the cricket is too present (it should be more far away outside. Filter it a little bit in the high frequencies)
2. At pouring the bottle, we hear a swapping liquid. This normally occurs only if a bottle is tilted very fast and the waves of a liquid are breaking. So better leave it away.
3. The motion of the arms can be more present (is it even there? Just used the speaker of my smartphone to listen). Try to produce sounds for every movement. Especially after pouring and laying back the hand on the table.
4. The atmosphere is very static. Maybe the situation is that the protagonist is allone in a abandoned place. But there should be more than a static noise and a cricket that draws the attention of the audience. Try some soft wind (maybe it causes some old doors/window to swing?!), try a dog or coyote barking far away. Even the chair could make some crackling noise. Instead of one cricket, try a swadron of crickets to illustrate the heat outside. You could support the atmosphere by a fly buzzing in the background (use stereo, but do not make the fly a focus of the scene).

JRReedVE 08-12-2019 10:50 AM

Re: feedback/criticism please
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by SoundDirk (Post 2535178)
Yes.. [emoji6]... my 2 Cents...
1. the cricket is too present (it should be more far away outside. Filter it a little bit in the high frequencies)
2. At pouring the bottle, we hear a swapping liquid. This normally occurs only if a bottle is tilted very fast and the waves of a liquid are breaking. So better leave it away.
3. The motion of the arms can be more present (is it even there? Just used the speaker of my smartphone to listen). Try to produce sounds for every movement. Especially after pouring and laying back the hand on the table.
4. The atmosphere is very static. Maybe the situation is that the protagonist is allone in a abandoned place. But there should be more than a static noise and a cricket that draws the attention of the audience. Try some soft wind (maybe it causes some old doors/window to swing?!), try a dog or coyote barking far away. Even the chair could make some crackling noise. Instead of one cricket, try a swadron of crickets to illustrate the heat outside. You could support the atmosphere by a fly buzzing in the background (use stereo, but do not make the fly a focus of the scene).

I tried to do the clothing rustle, couldn't get it to work right. IT was just a jump of incompressible noise.

TOM@METRO 08-12-2019 03:21 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
I agree regarding the cricket. :cool:

albee1952 08-13-2019 09:39 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
For those that have Spotify, here's my last big project:
https://open.spotify.com/album/0k5FfWlVQkdgytGvxtluXb

Actually played bass on a couple of tracks:D

Muddy-T 08-16-2019 09:41 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Juulz - Shy Rockstar

Kid walked into our Friendly Neighborhood Community Center Project Studio five years ago, when he was just fifteen.

Breaking into the local scene now with his own mix of rap and pop/punk rock.

Typical case of mixing bedroom recorded vocals to a two track 'beat'. Some of my 'improvements' (additional drums, guitars and bass) didn't make it to the final mix. Oh well...

http://https://youtu.be/M2FUMSj231g

T

Teolin 08-17-2019 08:46 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Love it. Great feel! Kinda short on lyrics though. Keep it up, man.

This post is in response to Sid:
Hi.. currently working on new stuff, but here's one i have on Soundcloud for your listening pleasure & open for critique. Cheers.

https://soundcloud.com/sidbarone/10-gods-blues_1
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Teolin 08-17-2019 09:05 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by albee1952 (Post 2535347)
For those that have Spotify, here's my last big project:
https://open.spotify.com/album/0k5FfWlVQkdgytGvxtluXb

Actually played bass on a couple of tracks:D

Sounds great, Dave! The music style isn't my cup of tea, but enjoyed it.

mspin 05-01-2020 07:40 AM

ist song recorded using PT 2020
 
https://soundcloud.com/markspinner/strange-days-final

This is a song called Strange Days. The 1st song I recorded using PT 2020

The session was stable. System is in the signature. The whole recording process was very fluid.

I used a Fender Deluxe Nashville Telecaster guitar. The amp was the PRS Archon Fifty. The gain channel was used on a cleaner setting to give it enough gain to sing. I used a Shure Beta 57 to close mic a JCM 800 4x12 cabinet.

I did 4 tracks of guitar for the rhythm tracks. Each played separately. I then panned to each side. I also alternated between the middle pick up and the neck/middle on the selector switch to give tonal variation.

The tracks were basically recorded dry although I used the slightest amount of reverb/delay using the Catalinbread Echorec. Effects were added in post. Some of the effect plug ins used were UAD 1176, Fairchild 670. Pultec eq's, MXR flanger , Brigade chorus, AIR gate etc.

The bass guitar was recorded direct through an Apollo Quad interface. Plug ins used were UAD 1176, Pultec eq.

The vocals were recorded using a Neumann TLM 102 through the Apollo. UAD Manley Voxbox was used on the master bus. I did multiple tracks on the backing tracks live to thicken up the chorus. There were panned appropriately to achieve the best results.

I mastered the track at approximately 12.5 integrated LUFS to prepare for any loudness normalizations by streaming services.
If any one has any questions I would be happy to answer or share any info.

Enjoy. I included the lyrics below if anyone cares to follow the song

Strange Days

Took a drive just the other day
It seemed like a good idea
Thoughts racing around inside of my mind
Put a song on the radio
While I drove down memory lane
Driving alone when it started to rain
These are strange days
When in the blink of an eye
One morning you wake up
And everything’s changed
These are strange days
When you love from afar
Keeping your distance away
From the ones that you love
These are strange days
Can’t even drink in a bar
That’s why I’m driving alone in my car
You’re still alive, you need to thrive
You need to keep it all together for another day
And it ain’t wise to hide eyes from what you’re seeing
It’s the truth
Oh, it’s just another day
Just look around at what you found
It ain’t pretty and it ain’t going away anytime real soon
It’s like a maze you’re in a daze of purple haze
You’re spinning round
Oh, it’s just another day

amagras 05-01-2020 12:51 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
A.K.A Heart 2020 soundtrack: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?lis...IfGdUReSn8OwYf

killah_trakz 05-10-2020 10:20 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Here's me mixing a record.

https://youtu.be/rKRn7bSfWkk

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Southsidemusic 05-11-2020 02:26 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by killah_trakz (Post 2565306)
Here's me mixing a record.

https://youtu.be/rKRn7bSfWkk

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Missed the part where you were ”mixing” ;) Only saw a play button and you showing what gear something went thru ...

killah_trakz 05-11-2020 04:54 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Southsidemusic (Post 2565315)
Missed the part where you were ”mixing” ;) Only saw a play button and you showing what gear something went thru ...

That's the beauty. Hahahahaha.

My voice sucks but I could a step by step in a Dolph Lundgren accent.

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EGS 05-11-2020 12:30 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
I cut together a new demo - audio engineering AND video engineering. See link in sig.

Southsidemusic 05-11-2020 01:35 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by killah_trakz (Post 2565319)
That's the beauty. Hahahahaha.

My voice sucks but I could a step by step in a Dolph Lundgren accent.

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Liked the song and was a good sound aswell! 👍🏻 Good Work :-)

killah_trakz 05-11-2020 01:44 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Southsidemusic (Post 2565362)
Liked the song and was a good sound aswell! [emoji1303] Good Work :-)

Awwww shucks. Thank so much.

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TOM@METRO 05-11-2020 02:10 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Actually yes, nice work. :-)

killah_trakz 05-14-2020 11:59 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by TOM@METRO (Post 2565366)
Actually yes, nice work. :-)

Thanks you [emoji120].

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killah_trakz 05-26-2020 12:49 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Still on my journey.

https://youtu.be/QY9i3IE4ons

I honestly need some outboard eq's.

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killah_trakz 06-09-2020 12:49 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Next record called " Fallen Star ".

https://youtu.be/ML2dMy-xsio

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Lertenserk 06-10-2020 07:14 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Here are so many nice works. I think, this thread will inspire me when I need it.
I've ordered a drum kit at home and I believe I will make some tracks using parts of drums. I've always wanted to learn play drums and finally I will fulfill the dream.

killah_trakz 06-16-2020 10:49 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
What all the recent gear I've acquired sounds like.

https://youtu.be/gzccH7mWe3k

Hope it is sonically enjoyable.

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SoundDirk 08-22-2020 12:11 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quick and dirty composition for a song contest. Made with only one synth-plugin and a few effects. Like if you like ;-) https://soundcloud.com/kv331synthmas...rt-by-antonius

Noteon 09-02-2020 06:26 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Here's my new single.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jkxQyKAt18o

Dj-Ike 09-03-2020 01:02 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by killah_trakz (Post 2569764)
What all the recent gear I've acquired sounds like.

https://youtu.be/gzccH7mWe3k

Hope it is sonically enjoyable.

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Feeling' it!!! Nice powerful/clear sound. Keep on doin' what U doin':cool:

mjslakeridge 09-18-2020 04:31 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Here is a song recorded on a Roland VS 1680. The other songs on my channel were mostly recorded on my Pro Tools Rig.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N_llBOscFfY

TOM@METRO 09-19-2020 10:49 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Twenty Miles of Dirt Road... I like it. Sounds like you were having fun. :-)

drh1 09-27-2020 04:50 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
I wrote a simple tune as a soundtrack for a video of some of my images of Vancouver. I guess you could describe it as slow funk. Here's the link to the YouTube video:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vYvcyipFsik

Southsidemusic 09-27-2020 05:47 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Any topliners and singers who wanna lay down some pop lyrics on a few songs? Le me know . For major labell artists of course and we can do a fun lucrative collab if we feel it works for both of us.

We have a lot of backgrounds produced privately (not pushed by Universal Music) which we can do something great with and either pitch to the artists we work with (big a-listers) or maybe you know someone who deserves a chance to release so e great songs produced by us and co-written with you? Or both?

This would be a serious project under our name Jack and Coke and we will step outside our normal routine and try a collaborarion with people we dont necessarily know :-)

amagras 10-09-2020 08:51 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Southsidemusic (Post 2578852)
Any topliners and singers who wanna lay down some pop lyrics on a few songs? Le me know . For major labell artists of course and we can do a fun lucrative collab if we feel it works for both of us.

We have a lot of backgrounds produced privately (not pushed by Universal Music) which we can do something great with and either pitch to the artists we work with (big a-listers) or maybe you know someone who deserves a chance to release so e great songs produced by us and co-written with you? Or both?

This would be a serious project under our name Jack and Coke and we will step outside our normal routine and try a collaborarion with people we dont necessarily know :-)

Latin market too? Send me an email. [emoji106]

Southsidemusic 10-09-2020 10:25 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by amagras (Post 2579782)
Latin market too? Send me an email. [emoji106]

100%

Have worked with Daddy Yankee and are talking to Bad Bunny so absolutely Latin more than ever. Will email a few links later tonight brother.

maccattack 10-16-2020 01:40 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
I put a lot of work into this. Didn't want to ever get a final mix I was enjoying it so much, dancing around the room and all.
https://soundcloud.com/saul-behan-dunne/the-promise-of-america

Seems to have fallen flat though. :p

mspin 11-13-2020 06:47 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Southsidemusic (Post 2578852)
Any topliners and singers who wanna lay down some pop lyrics on a few songs? Le me know . For major labell artists of course and we can do a fun lucrative collab if we feel it works for both of us.

We have a lot of backgrounds produced privately (not pushed by Universal Music) which we can do something great with and either pitch to the artists we work with (big a-listers) or maybe you know someone who deserves a chance to release so e great songs produced by us and co-written with you? Or both?

This would be a serious project under our name Jack and Coke and we will step outside our normal routine and try a collaborarion with people we dont necessarily know :-)

Send me a link if you think my vocals can be placed on something
https://youtu.be/ymBTIbuipmM

take77 11-23-2020 05:05 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Here's my wannabe track.
I did all the instrumentation myself and give it a real-world rating of 6.5

No vocals -1

Artificial sounding instruments/quantized feel (stock Xpand 2 sounds) -1

Not professionally mixed/mastered -1

Scratch guitar performances (just to get the ideas across) -.5

I have lyrics and tried singing the vocal ideas but I'm just wasn't born with a voice.
So I emulated the vocal melodies with synth sax.

I'm not selling myself short on the ideas - it's a nice sketch demo. Just would like to hear it performed by a real band with a female singer singing the lyrics n melodies.

Enjoy~

https://soundcloud.com/rockexotic/escape-til-sunrise

Voideco 03-12-2021 03:03 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Hi all, long time no see.

I created a meditation song with singing bowls, a gong, synth, shamanic drum, a shaker and mantra chanting. People who like to meditate, tend to find it very good to flow on. The sound is awesome imo :-)

You can listen here: https://headandheartcoaching.nl/wp-c...-alignment.mp3

I hope some of you will comment if you think on the sound of the instruments and the overall sound. Thanks in advance :-)

Voideco 03-12-2021 03:38 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Noteon (Post 2576555)

This one sounds pretty awesome. Reminds me a bit of Ennya in the far distance. Very mysterious, and the voices layered make it nicely dramatical. The text leaves room for fantasy; "All the information is too slow" WTF??? :eek: in this technological world we're living in :D So you may be speaking here from the viewpoint of some Big Tech guy or something, I'm puzzled.

Excellent!

killah_trakz 06-17-2021 02:28 AM

Testing my video / hybrid rig
 
Added a little seasoning. Doing the hybrid approach.

https://youtu.be/OwIjf4rw0sE

basslik 12-28-2021 12:36 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
*GREAT STUFF FOLKS*

Mediocre Digi 003 convertors. Vocals(KASCA), me on keys, Taurus pedals and bass.

Ryan Hoyle provided drum tracks, drummer of the once Collective Soul band.

Larry Marciano from L.A. provided the guitar tracks. (whopping 16 guitar tracks, included D/I's).

Cover tune of Geddy Lee's solo album My Favorite Headache, song Home On The Strange.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCzKbRgBJRw


Had so much fun, and still learning from all you great cats.

Noteon 12-29-2021 12:05 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Thank you for kind words Voideco. There is no bigger drama in the words. Some days there are some problems with moving data;)

basslik 12-29-2021 12:35 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Noteon (Post 2623930)
Thank you for kind words Voideco. There is no bigger drama in the words. Some days there are some problems with moving data;)

Does have a unique signature as well. Usually can point to a artist/band it sounds like. But has it's own. NICE

basslik 12-29-2021 02:15 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by take77 (Post 2584741)
Here's my wannabe track.
I did all the instrumentation myself and give it a real-world rating of 6.5

No vocals -1

Artificial sounding instruments/quantized feel (stock Xpand 2 sounds) -1

Not professionally mixed/mastered -1

Scratch guitar performances (just to get the ideas across) -.5

I have lyrics and tried singing the vocal ideas but I'm just wasn't born with a voice.
So I emulated the vocal melodies with synth sax.

I'm not selling myself short on the ideas - it's a nice sketch demo. Just would like to hear it performed by a real band with a female singer singing the lyrics n melodies.

Enjoy~

https://soundcloud.com/rockexotic/escape-til-sunrise

I dig it. Somewhat lounge music mixed with tad of soft rock. I clearly hear the Moog in the song too. Neat


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