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<font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial">I think the levels sound fine.Maybe just a little louder on the chorus.The only other thing I here is that It could use a bass part.

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yea, i was telling ben (capt pants) that i wasn't sure if i was gonna add bass or not, to be honest this is the only song i have ever written that sounded like that.

i was originally gonna do a rap over the drums but i put down a guitar track and said "i have an idea" and that song came out.

i will try raising the chorus vox and adding some bass and see what that does. maybe even a slide guitar solo during the fade out.....the options are endless since its such an easy little number to build around.

again,thanks for listening [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

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ok, i added some bass and a "solo" to my song and mixed it differently, and labled it (version 2) on my site.

click here if you wish

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bi0force1- i dig the vox, not sure i follow the bass line. of course, listening on my comp speakers isn't the greatest way to checkout a bass line!

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yea, the bass is pretty bad, i didnt mess w/ the EQ on it so it kinda fades behind everything else and sounds like a third guitar

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I think your latest version of the song is great....if the bass wasnt there. In this song, simplicity sounds grand! Maybe towards the end, have a nice harmonic droning of a higher pitched guitar solo following the main chords.

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bi0,
I've tried 3 different times today, and keep getting 'temporarily unavailable'. I was starting to think that was the name of your song... [img]images/icons/grin.gif[/img] But, I will keep trying. And yep, I've tried right click, left click, rubbing the mouse on the screen 3 times, and even sprayed Windex all around the room... still nothing...

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bi0force1- nothin' wrong with the vocals on that tune! hec, people have made millions of dollars as lead singers and never sounded that good!
for my tastes, having them a little louder in the mix would be great, but as the sit now it kind of adds to the mystery of the tune.
great job [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

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thanks alot guys, now im blushing [img]images/icons/rolleyes.gif[/img]

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