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here's one i started today. if anyone is interested in collaborating, i need vocals, or at least lyrics...

http://basstardz.dhs.org/scratch/dB-radikal.mp3

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<font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial">what type of lyrics are you looking for....like what subject? i'd be happy to help.

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Sounds good, Brian...

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my latest
www.modernamusement.net/music/philadelphia.mp3

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Great job Brian. Pretty easy to pick your main instrument. [img]images/icons/wink.gif[/img]
I've got a couple of jobs on the go with Roy, but if you're still looking when they're done, I might give it a crack.

Mark

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joz, i am in awe of that song. it is what i personally like to hear.

i think the best trait was the guitar being distorted or on overdrive.....it adds so much to the piano and gives it that real ROCK sound i love.

its a great song that has a different sound from everything else here on the DUC. GOOD JOB [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

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Hey Joz
That's a great track! Only a couple of suggestions...
The acoustic guitar at the start could come up a bit. The voice sounds a bit big in comparison.
At 24 secs there's a little jingly bit that makes me think there's some kind of rhythm thing coming in. So maybe get some shaker/hats thing happening through the second verse.
Also some of the elec guitar rhythm parts (especially the one panned hard left) is a bit quiet, to the point where it sounds wrong. To me it needs to come up or be left out.

All up it's a great track and is very commercial. Some excellent playing and singing. Keep it up.

Mark

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awesome, joz. good job.

good: song, performance, recording, mix. there's only one thing missing. it sounds too good. you might want to throw 4 or 5 limiters on to get that "radio" sound... hehehe [img]images/icons/cool.gif[/img]

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Joz - Totally professional. Great performance, excellent songwriting, tight, well arranged, well recorded.

Congrats and best of luck.

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Joz - I liked the track...good melodies; several hooks to pick from; nice edge to end it out.