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G'day Tim
I agree with both comments above. I think the main problem with the vocal volume is that there is a bit too much reverb on them. Rev can make vox sound louder than they are.
The guitars could be thinned out a bit (EQ) and this will give them a bit more separation.
Drums sound obviously canned when they go into the fast snare roll parts. Maybe lower the volume and up the rev at these points to blurr it a bit?
Track has lots of potential. Good work.

Frank
Definately sounds like an opener to me. Nice clear clean mix.

Mark

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Thanks Mark. By the way, what part of Aus are you livin' in? My wife is from Sydney...she moved here to Omaha about 18 months ago...fairdinkum!

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Frank
My studio is just out of a little town called Fish Creek in southern Victoria. It's only a few minutes drive from Wilson's Promontory which is the southern-most part of mainland Australia.
I look out the window in the studio and look over rolling green hills. Great place to make music. [img]images/icons/grin.gif[/img]
Mark

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Here's a song I recorded and played bass on. Check it, yo! It aint pop music.

http://www.planeside.com/old/forum/temp/01-Fuchsia.mp3

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Roy, I know its a little late, but I just heard your tune with the Motorcycle Samples(I think its caleld Burn?). Cool tune man. Has a neat little industrial edge to it. Wonder what took me so long to hear it? I supposedly downloaded it 3 or more months ago according to my computer.

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Here's a pop reggae track I did exclusively on the 001. Hope you enjoy!

mp3.com/shag_williams

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Here's a new one. Another downtempo, sort of Harlem Jazz kinda vibe.

Az Wam Talkingbowt

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I just put up a some ditties for you guys to have a slice,
Whether your views are cruel or seemingly nice,
Know these weren't meant to bore you, they just happened at the time.
So please have a listen with your always open mind.
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Sorry 'bout the low level on the instrumentals... [img]images/icons/rolleyes.gif[/img]

Stuff For The Listening

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Metaltim - WitchQueen is cool. Sounds very Frank Zappa to me. (That's a compliment - I'm a big Zappa fan.) Definitely back off on the vocal level. Serious drum work!

Frank - I liked AM Jam. Good sense of melody on all the instrumentals.

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<font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial">your link is F'ed (got an extra http:// in there...)