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DDP, I am an Idiot; Please excuse it.

The link is at:

try This!

It will be the first song, top of the list.
Thanks for trying and pointing that out!!
=-Ben

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captain_pants- that worked, thanks!
music paints a definite "dark landscape". really like all the sounds you've got going on in there. the vox seemed real low in the mix. hard for me to understand (except "dumbass") maybe that's what you're going for? or maybe it's these high quality microsoft speakers i'm using.......

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Hehe, I think you are right, I dont think its that the mix is too low; I think the vox are two mudded into the mix, I think I need to throw a one-band EQ on them, and remove some of the Low's, so they clearly stand out from the low piano and bass guitar. Cause I actually, DONT say Dumbass(its, "you've DONE AS you should", but clearly sounds like Dumbass).

Im working with someone else as to putting strings in the song, if that goes through, I will mix in the vox better, and send it up again. I did want to get the vox a little on the unrecognizable side, but just for the verses, the chorus I agree %100 needs to be cleaned up. I also mixed this with headphones(big mistake), and since I sang it, I can interpret what I say, and it doesnt sound as bad, but taking it from the outside perspective, I guess it would sound unregnizable!
Thanks for your help, and I appreciate you checking it out!
=-Ben

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Thanks for the kind remarks DDP, - thats the thing that make my day..

CP, - check your mail.. [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

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captain_pants- maybe i picked up on "dumbass" cause i hear it at work so often.....i work with 60 females and only 4 other guys.

looking forwad to hearing the remix, can't go wrong adding a string section to a dark song.

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P A M,
Really, really nice... [img]images/icons/wink.gif[/img] My favorite of these is probably 'New Night'. Very good work, in my opinion... Thanks for the listen, Roy

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Ahoy Captain,
'Murderer' is killer... [img]images/icons/grin.gif[/img] (had to say that). I think it is very cool that you don't restrict yourself creatively. And the sounds you've chosen keep it interesting. This is how I would imagine a typical Trent Reznor dream to be...
I do think the vocal could be clearer, but I still like the effect you used. What did you run it through, if you don't mind me asking?

Thanks, Roy (Mr. LXi [img]images/icons/grin.gif[/img] )

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ok i'll bite give this one a go:

o si yo

this was a one off for the DUC jsut giving it a broader audience

ken;

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Thanks Guys.
Mr. LXi, Actually, what I did was record the lyric in a whisper form first, The run that through my J-Station Distortion Pedal, Then I recorded a normal verse Vox, and ran that through the Distortion pedal as well. Then selecting between the two tracks, I mixed them together grabbing certain words from one track and replacing them in the other track. You can hear so, when you listen to song, and on the second verse the last word is "as you wait, in the NIGHT"
and if you listen to the word "Night", it actually sounds like a scream, but it was just taken from the Whispered Disto. Track. And then I just threw regular clean Vox on top of that.
=-CP.

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would I be a total geek if I entered a link to an mp3.com site of mine? At this time my website is down and I dont have time to build another one with my schedule.
SoS dont wanna look stoopid. [img]images/icons/cool.gif[/img]