my first song on my mbox.

[heartparts]

have a listen and tell me what you think.

http://homepage.mac.com/heartparts/FileSharing7.html

[Egghd]

Cool.

[Ben Jenssen]

Good stuff.
How old are you? How experienced?
Expressive style of music, dynamic mix.
I like it.

[slowdive]

I was pleasantly surprised overall. I was curious to hear what someone else has done with an MBox. The chorus was very strong. Nice to hear that much "oomph" come out musically of the MBox.

The only criticism is that it bears the skeletal forefather of Radiohead's albatross "Creep," insofar as the layout of the music goes. Obviously, it's a different song, but the general blueprint of "Creep" is there, whether intended or not. Certainly not a bad place to find influence, not at all.

Overall, it's definitely a song that an 18 year old girl with a sassy, dyed-black hairdo wearing a "vintage" Sunny Day Real Estate shirt would dig. I've never met anyone who wouldn't dig that comparison, so I commend you.

-MB

[heartparts]

thanks guys. I'm 23 years old and have recorded some stuff on an independent label, and now i'm just trying to find a band so i can play some shows. that's why i'm making these songs, so i can just record everything myself and have a demo that i can give to guys who might play/ let me play shows.