AUDIO CLip- Hip Hop Mixdown feedback?

[nukmusic]

Hi Protoolians, I need some mixdown feedback on this Hip Hop song...........any comments are welcomed ( [email protected] ). 192k mp3

http://www.nukmusic.com/socold.mp3

http://www.nukmusic.com/socold.mp3

It's recorded and mixed in PT. Test mastered also.
Thanks Folks

[DHS]

vocals ridin a bit high for my taste. but thats not necc a bad thing. i always struggle with vocal levels. maybe some in and outs on the verse to livn it up a bit. also drums aint really poppin. and the sample sounds like it was recorded in mono. typical chop [bleep]. maybe put a chorus on it and get it a lil ((((((wider))))))
two words: radio edit. hellauva long song. last but not least may wanna let a mastering guru touch that.

[woodywho]

Take in acct. i'm listening on computer speakers......Snare needs more pop/snap!! Kick is sitting good! Hihat needs to come up so you can ride! Vocals need to come down .5-1db, need adlibs or doubles and more verb! Too much delay (vol.) in chorus! I see that you are from N.O., but rappers sound like they are from elsewhere (not a bad thing)? This is my feedback!

[nukmusic]

Cool........all rappers are from New Orleans, still here. The double-delay(hook)is what we are looking for. All samples are mono, and grimy....track was programmed on the EMU SP1200. Cleaned them up as much as I could.