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TOM@METRO 07-17-2019 03:22 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Didn't work for me either.

JRReedVE 07-17-2019 03:37 PM

feedback/criticism please
 
Can I get some feedback/criticism on my reel please.

https://vimeo.com/348686049

JR

SoundDirk 08-11-2019 07:59 AM

Re: feedback/criticism please
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by JRReedVE (Post 2533035)
Can I get some feedback/criticism on my reel please.



https://vimeo.com/348686049



JR

Yes.. [emoji6]... my 2 Cents...
1. the cricket is too present (it should be more far away outside. Filter it a little bit in the high frequencies)
2. At pouring the bottle, we hear a swapping liquid. This normally occurs only if a bottle is tilted very fast and the waves of a liquid are breaking. So better leave it away.
3. The motion of the arms can be more present (is it even there? Just used the speaker of my smartphone to listen). Try to produce sounds for every movement. Especially after pouring and laying back the hand on the table.
4. The atmosphere is very static. Maybe the situation is that the protagonist is allone in a abandoned place. But there should be more than a static noise and a cricket that draws the attention of the audience. Try some soft wind (maybe it causes some old doors/window to swing?!), try a dog or coyote barking far away. Even the chair could make some crackling noise. Instead of one cricket, try a swadron of crickets to illustrate the heat outside. You could support the atmosphere by a fly buzzing in the background (use stereo, but do not make the fly a focus of the scene).

JRReedVE 08-12-2019 10:50 AM

Re: feedback/criticism please
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by SoundDirk (Post 2535178)
Yes.. [emoji6]... my 2 Cents...
1. the cricket is too present (it should be more far away outside. Filter it a little bit in the high frequencies)
2. At pouring the bottle, we hear a swapping liquid. This normally occurs only if a bottle is tilted very fast and the waves of a liquid are breaking. So better leave it away.
3. The motion of the arms can be more present (is it even there? Just used the speaker of my smartphone to listen). Try to produce sounds for every movement. Especially after pouring and laying back the hand on the table.
4. The atmosphere is very static. Maybe the situation is that the protagonist is allone in a abandoned place. But there should be more than a static noise and a cricket that draws the attention of the audience. Try some soft wind (maybe it causes some old doors/window to swing?!), try a dog or coyote barking far away. Even the chair could make some crackling noise. Instead of one cricket, try a swadron of crickets to illustrate the heat outside. You could support the atmosphere by a fly buzzing in the background (use stereo, but do not make the fly a focus of the scene).

I tried to do the clothing rustle, couldn't get it to work right. IT was just a jump of incompressible noise.

TOM@METRO 08-12-2019 03:21 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
I agree regarding the cricket. :cool:

albee1952 08-13-2019 09:39 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
For those that have Spotify, here's my last big project:
https://open.spotify.com/album/0k5FfWlVQkdgytGvxtluXb

Actually played bass on a couple of tracks:D

Muddy-T 08-16-2019 09:41 PM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Juulz - Shy Rockstar

Kid walked into our Friendly Neighborhood Community Center Project Studio five years ago, when he was just fifteen.

Breaking into the local scene now with his own mix of rap and pop/punk rock.

Typical case of mixing bedroom recorded vocals to a two track 'beat'. Some of my 'improvements' (additional drums, guitars and bass) didn't make it to the final mix. Oh well...

http://https://youtu.be/M2FUMSj231g

T

Teolin 08-17-2019 08:46 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Love it. Great feel! Kinda short on lyrics though. Keep it up, man.

This post is in response to Sid:
Hi.. currently working on new stuff, but here's one i have on Soundcloud for your listening pleasure & open for critique. Cheers.

https://soundcloud.com/sidbarone/10-gods-blues_1
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Teolin 08-17-2019 09:05 AM

Re: Let's hear your latest stuff....right here
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by albee1952 (Post 2535347)
For those that have Spotify, here's my last big project:
https://open.spotify.com/album/0k5FfWlVQkdgytGvxtluXb

Actually played bass on a couple of tracks:D

Sounds great, Dave! The music style isn't my cup of tea, but enjoyed it.


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